Five Tips to Make Your Writing Sparkle
Paul Gillin
APRIL 28, 2011
Describing the factory in which the century-old breakfast staple is made, reporter Barry Newman writes (emphasis added): All day every day, objects with the proportions of hewn firewood and the heft of cinder blocks hurtle along a conveyor, dive into a steel chute, disappear down a black hole — and emit what sounds like a startled scream.
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