7 Awful First Sentences That Are Killing Your Outreach Emails
Hubspot
JUNE 5, 2018
I tossed them from my repertoire … and my response rate more than doubled. Let’s say you wrote, “I’m also a member of the Dallas Entrepreneurs group on LinkedIn, and I saw you posted a question about Google AdWords.” Here are some sample lines: "Did our pricing page have all the details you need?". "Do My name is … ”.
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